My students teach me so much. I mean that. I feel like I’m always apologizing to my 1st period class.
I’ll use today as an example, but first, let me back up a step.
We have been working on persuasion. We studied the rhetorical devices (repetition, parallelism, analogy) used in Dr. Martin Luther King Jr.’s “I Have a Dream.” Students practiced using those devices in their own writing. Students performed persuasive skits using ethos, pathos, and logos. We then analyzed Super Bowl commercials for persuasive techniques. Now, students are embarking upon a journey to practice persuasive writing and argumentative writing which we spent Monday distinguishing.
Here is a list of differences that students generated:
- Aims to get readers to believe you opinion
- Supported with persuasive techniques
- Supported with facts and statistics
- Involves two sides
- Involves research
- More formal
Tuesday, we officially started our persuasive writing unit. We told each class that they’d work together to write and publish a blog, so each class period voted on a topic. Our desks are in groups of four, and we asked groups to discuss the topic and then craft claims. This caused quite a bit of fun, healthy debate, but in each class period, we were able to come to a decision.
- Period 1: The driving age should be lowered to 15.5, and teens should be able to get their temps by 14.5.
- Period 2: Dublin Coffman High School should start at 9:00AM (instead of 7:55).
- Period 3:Schools should never completely block social media use nor search engines, but these technologies should be heavily monitored.
- Period 5:Dublin Coffman High School should adopt an open campus schedule like colleges.
- Period 6:The legal drinking age should be raised to twenty-five.
We showed students a model from last year as well as the requirements of the assignment.
We have 7 groups of desks in our classroom, so we decided to have groups volunteer to complete different parts of our persuasive blog post, so three groups chose three different persuasive techniques, three other groups claimed the rhetorical devices, and one group found media to include. This all happened on Monday, and it was AWESOME. It went so well, in fact, that I emailed our literacy coach to brag. I just knew that she’d be so proud of all the modeling, scaffolding, and most importantly, learning happening in our room.
Fast-forward to today. I enter 1st period with 1 goal in mind. I want the whole class to collaboratively work on piecing together the parts of the blog that groups crafted separately yesterday. I tell them this. I stand at the board and ask students to help me outline our blog. One student helps me do this. One student. One. So, we are not off to a great start when it comes to collaboratively writing a blog post, but I have high hopes for the next part. I ask a student from each group to get on a shared Google Doc. I ask them to copy and paste their group’s work from yesterday into the document. This takes longer than expected, and as I look around the room, only the 7 students logged onto the document are engaged in organizing the blog. The other 20 are not interested in what we are doing no matter how hard I try to redirect their attention to what is happening on the projector. It doesn’t take me long to realize that THIS IS NOT WORKING. It’ll be torture to continue this for another 30 minutes, and I definitely can’t continue this all day long, so after 10 minutes of this unbearable struggle, I abandon ship and QUICKLY come up with an alternative.
I tell 1st period, “I’m sorry guys, and I’m sorry again for having to apologize to your class period so often, but this is not working like I imagined it would. I really wanted us all to craft a blog together, but this is just not going well, so here’s what we’re going to do. Students currently on the Google Doc, make a copy of the document and then share your copy with the rest of your group that you’re sitting with now and that you worked with yesterday. You’re now going to work in teams of just four rather than as a whole class. I want you to act like you’re a real editing team for a real blog. Turn what you and your classmates came up with yesterday into a cohesive blog. The best blog of the class wins donuts tomorrow, and I’ll also publish your blog to my real blog. You only have until the rest of the period. Ready? Go!”
And just like that, all students are involved again, and many are more invested in their writing than I have ever seen before!
… and then we run out of time.
I’ll have to give them more time tomorrow….
BUT, at least I know what to do 2nd, 3rd, 5th, and 6th period because I have learned so much about what not to do during 1st period.
2nd period enters, and so does my co-teacher, Deb (she was in a meeting during 1st period). I get the students all set up to use the entire period productively in groups of four, and I use the same incentives of donuts and the most authentic audience I can conceivably provide on the spot(this blog). I fill Deb in on the debacle of 1st period.
We watch second period closely. We celebrate. We celebrate because we’ve been reading Empower: What Happens When Students Own Their Learning by John Spencer and A.J. Juliani, and therefore, we no longer want to make decisions for our students that they can make for themselves. Our conversation goes something like this:
“This is going so much better than last period”
“This is good. I like this.”
“They’re struggling, and struggling is good.”
“They’re having to use each other and their resources instead of us. ”
“You’re right! Remember last year?
“We gave them a blog template to fill in. That was dumb.”
“We designed their blogs for them and removed all of the creative fun on accident”
“Look at them arguing over titles and fonts this year.”
“They’re really getting into it!”
We continue to watch closely. We circle the room. We listen to conversations. We mostly try to remain hands-off so that students figure it out on their own. Toward the end, we start to peek over shoulders. Many of the blogs don’t look like blogs at all. They look like a bunch of copied and pasted elements lacking any cohesive whole. Even the blogs that look like blogs don’t really read like blogs. We troubleshoot, and we try to explain this quickly before they head out the door.
3rd period enters. We know what to do now. We explain everything just as we did last period including the donut incentive and semi-authentic audience deal, but this time, we get them set up for even more success than our 1st and 2nd periods by showing the model again and emphasizing what the end product should look like. We watch closely. It’s going well but not perfectly. I notice that some groups are totally engaged. I pick up on the fact that some students really want to win the donuts. Some students really want to show up on my blog. Some students just want to win. Some students are not engaged. Some students are letting their group members carry all the weight, so Deb and I chat.
“This is going pretty well, but it could be better. Why aren’t all our kids empowered?”
I think about the Empower book again.
What decisions are we making for students that they could make for themselves?
“Next period, let’s let students pick their own groups. I don’t think we’d see the lack of engagement if we let them pick their own groups.”
“Let’s try it!”
5th period enters. We really know what to do now. As students walk in, we tell them to choose their own seats and to choose wisely because they’re expected to communicate well and work collaboratively. We show the model and explain expectations. We incentivize with donuts and a chance to appear on this blog. Groups are working fanatically! Everyone is engaged. This is what teachers dream of.
I watch closely. I keep thinking. I start to worry. I’m a worrier. This is going well… right? I’m not just imagining it, am I? It took a lot to get here. I bribed kids with donuts. I’m pretty sure that’s a huge pedagogical NO-NO, but I was desperate, and desperate times call for desperate measures. They look engaged. They even look empowered. I wonder what would have happened if I had never mentioned donuts, but I can’t renege on that now.
6th period enters. Despite my worries, we do everything the same as 5th period because it worked and because I can’t offer donuts to 1st, 2nd, 3rd, and 5th period without offering them to 6th period. Deb and I stand in the middle and watch closely. There’s no doubt; they’re engaged; they’re empowered. They’re working so hard, and they’re learning so much. They bell is about to ring, and one group is arguing. I listen.
“We should NOT have all of our names in the header.”
“Yeah, then all our names show up on EVERY page!”
“Yes, we should! It looks good!”
“No, we shouldn’t. It looks dumb!”
[warning bell rings]
“Mrs. Belden will just remove our names anyways.”
“Yeah, because we’re going to win and make it on her blog.”
“Well, we’re NOT going to win with our names on EVERY page!”
“Yeah, remove the names so that we can win the donuts!”
“We’re not going to win guys. We’re NOT going to get the donuts!”
“YES, we ARE going to win the donuts!”
“Guys, we did really good today, AND IT’S NOT ABOUT THE DONUTS!!!”
“Yeah, IT’S ABOUT THE JOURNEY!” [boys exit in fits of laughter]
The room is empty, and I’m sitting at my desk smiling like a fool because they have NO IDEA what a journey the day has been.